Saturday, June 24, 2006

Haiku 2

Carried by the wind
Tears welling up in my eyes
Watch you float from me

2 Comments:

Blogger Marshwiggle23 said...

what is the implicit metaphor? feather light?

4:21 AM  
Blogger Aylaha said...

yes, light enough to be carried by the "wind/winds".. they are a metaphor themselves...

10:13 AM  

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